The prose is a bit bare bones and some of the dialogue choices a bit iffy but the emotional core of the story pays off. I make this critique not out of any desire to be a “hater”, but in hopes you will improve as a writer. Because there are the makings of a great story here.
The prose is a bit bare bones and some of the dialogue choices a bit iffy but the emotional core of the story pays off. I make this critique not out of any desire to be a “hater”, but in hopes you will improve as a writer. Because there are the makings of a great story here.